CA Blogging Assignment 2

My revised thesis statement for essay 1 is  "The Japanese Government should not only open its door for immigrants but also set stricter rules for them, in order to supply the lack of workforce in the near future in Japan, improve the current situation of illegal foreign residents and raise Japanese people’s awareness of globalization."

The first supporting point is that Japan will be lack in workforce and that the government should open its door for immigrants. There are a drastic decline in the birthrates in Japan and an increasing of elderly people. If the current situation continues and the Japanese government does not do anything for this, the young would not be able to support the elderly people.

The second supporting point is that The Japanese government should set stricter rules for immigrants. Currently, there is a number of illegal foreign resistance in Japan and it is getting a bigger problem. If the Japanese government does not set stricter rules for immigrants when it opens its door, a huge number of people would come to Japan at a time, which would confuse the situation.


The third supporting point is that Japanese people’s awareness of  globalization needs to be raised. Even though the Japan is now so globalized and there are many foreign people living in Japan, there are still some people who mistakenly believe that Japan is mono-racial country, which is causing some people to have negative image for foreigners, especially people from China and Korea. These misunderstanding and attitude should be changed so that there would be less discrimination or negative images toward those Asian people and they would  feel comfortable to live in Japan.